Yes, it is almost Friday once again, and that means it is time to write that 100 words more or less that tells somethng about the picture that Madison Woods so kindly posts each week. For links to other posts or to learn more about the fictioneers, click right here and go to Madison’s blog: http://madisonwoods.wordpress.com/flash-fiction/pathways
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More than likely, you will be glad you did
Summer Afternoon
“Look”, he exclaimed. “See that log on the trail? I fell there, ’bout gave up!”
I silently nod at his tale.
“That dip, I figured my ankle wuz spraint.”
We sat on the hilltop, sun warming our backs.
He studied bare stubbed toes, Knees peeking though tattered jeans.
He reached for his pack.
“I’m hongry”, no mention of sharing.
Nuts, fruit, a bottle of drink.
Eight year old runaway…
I bark, wag my tail and lead the way home.
Like it, it’s amazing that we all come up with such different wonderful stories on the same picture. Very well done. Thanks for stopping by mine
Awwww! This was a wonderful story–I love how you used the dogs POV to tell it. Good job!
Mine: http://www.vlgregory-circa1800.vpweb.com/blog.html
thank you! Your history lesson was very well done!
awh, I really liked this, sweet.
http://writersclubkl.wordpress.com/2012/06/15/friday-fictioneers-do-not-follow-me-home/
OOH! What a surprise! Beautiful, very unexpected!
Love it.
Thanks for stopping by.
Oooh! This was really, really good. Love the twist ending! Mine’s here: http://marilynkaydennis.wordpress.com/madison-woods-friday-fictioneers-witch
thank you so much. I had fun with it.
What an excellent ending – nice twist to the tale at the end and it says a lot of ‘friendship’ without being cloying or over blown.
Here’s mine: http://womanontheedgeofreality.com/2012/06/15/friday-fictioneers-visiting-grannys/
I love this. A fine doggy twist. A good lesson on sharing from his point of view. Well done. Mine is here: http://readinpleasure.wordpress.com/2012/06/15/fridayfictioneers-sacrilege/
Yes, nice twist in the ‘tail’ (to echo Linda and make a silly joke) and very well done.
Ours is here: http://www.lazuli-portals.com/flash-fiction/expect-the-unexpected
thank you, on my way to read yours.
I am glad he’s leading the way home. Nice dialect usage – gave it a good sense of place.
Mine is here: http://wp.me/p1Wqon-aA
Those were the words the boy said in my head, I just did my best to tell it.
Very nicely done. Best of friends on a journey, a little boy and his dog. I liked it very much.
Here’s mine: http://thebradleychronicles.wordpress.com/2012/06/14/flash-fiction-friday-letting-go/
thanks JKBradley.
Very well done. I loved it. I love it from the dog’s point of view. And I loved the dialect that you used. Good stuff, as always! Here’s mine: http://theforgottenwife.com/2012/06/15/friday-fictioneers-6152012-the-watcher/
A nice twist in the tail there… 🙂 Nicely done.
http://castelsarrasin.wordpress.com/2012/06/15/given-a-choice-friday-fictioneers-june-2012/
🙂
Ha! I liked how natural the dog’s POV was. Cute story 🙂
thanks, Madison. It just seemed like what a dog might think. (Is it obvious, I have been around kids and dogs?)
The boy’s doggy buddy tells the tale.
Mine’s here: http://logo-ligi.com/2012/06/15/six-oclock/
Ahhhh,,,cute..doggy tail….er…tale. Here’s mine:
http://www.triplemoonstar.blogspot.com
Very cute. Loved the dog POV. Thanks for commenting on mine.
http://www.rochelle-wisoff.blogspot.com/2012/06/mothers-gift.html
This one really made me smile : )